Free writing/Quick write

Today we did a free write we had 30 minutes to write anything you wanted.But there had to be "As" in it this is mine.

As her long brown hair swirls side to side you can feel the air brush past you as she glides her way thru the traffic caused by people. She walks past with her head down still thinking about what just happened. Her eyes are as glossy as a new shiny green metallic car whizzing thru the town. She's wearing a cheap new shirt that has a mustache on it with ripped shorts at the bottom as people stare her eyes balls began to water like a glass ball that was polished to the death. The tears drag down her face like a weight on top of my eyes. As she gets to her destination she orders a steamy black coffee as she sits down and glares at it she can see her salty tears dripping into her into her coffee and stares blankly into the dark coffee.As she slurps it she can feel the warmness touching her delicate lips with freshly applied watermelon lip balm. When she takes her last and final sip she can see a girl with blond hair with shimmering blue crystal eyes. As i look up from the coffee i can see her beautiful eyes staring at me i glance and smile. She looks at me and laughs and says “are you alright” i fake smile and say “Sure”. She grins and walks off with her hands on her hips.I stand up and walk off with my head down grinning as if i just died but really i did.