Free writing task

In writing we have been doing workshops. I'm in miss robertson's workshop. For this writing we had to write a normal story and if she said something we had to put it in our writing. This is mine that i did.

Here we are at the baby shower i drag my feet to the table to grab a snack and run my hand across it, it was as soft as bread. I pick up some grapes and hear a whisper from my mum reminding me to say thank you to my sister for everything.I go outside and go sit by the huge tree in the backyard and start to write a story.As my dreams wander off the pages i can see it all coming to life